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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given line graph describes the manufacturing rates of the main fuels in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
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, it could be seen that there was an upward trend in all fuels, with the exception of coal. As can be seen from the figures for petroleum and natural gas, petroleum ranked in the first position between 1981 and 2000, which
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produced 90
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 in 1981
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 rose to nearly 140
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 in 1984 before staying at the same number until 1988,
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 decreased to exactly 100
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 in 1990, after that, the production of petroleum shot up to over 140
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 in 2000.
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, the manufacture of natural gas had the lowest figures with only 39
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 in 1981,
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 its number increased slightly to 42
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 in 1991, after that, its figures increased significantly to 100
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 in 2000 and ranked in the second position. Regarding the remaining fuel, coal had the second highest production in 1981 with 80
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, but it decreased to 34
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 in 1984. From 1984 to 1986, its figure went up from 34
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 to 60
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 before keeping the same number until 1989. Between 1989 and 2000, the manufacture of coal presented a downward trend, from 60
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 in 1989 to 38
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 in 2000, which had the lowest

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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