You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
given
bar chart provides data about several employments in Australia in the Verb problem
apply
last
year, accounting for gender.
Overall
, the male proportion is the highest except for two professions, since many women tended to focus on clerical and professional work in this
country.
Considering the male population, the highest number of men worked as vendors in last
year, reporting at 900,000. According to
this
figure, clerical workers accounted for approximately 880,000. The lowest number had been shown for labourers, at 400,000.
However
, the employed female had shown the highest figure for clerical, at more than 950,000, and the second place was taken by professional workers at 700,000. There were two job types that were least favourable among women: tradespeople and production, showing the same proportion of 100,000.Submitted by kavinduanupama20 on
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