The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The maps above display the status quo of an industrial area situated in a town called Norbiton, and the adjustments in consideration to the field.
According to
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the blueprint, the adjustments mainly consist of two aspects: on the one hand, two new branches will be added to the original transportation system;
on the other hand
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, the layout of buildings will be adjusted to accommodate more facilities. Let us begin with the introduction of improvements in motorways.
First,
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there will be two branches added to the large roundabout at the centre of the region, one of which will traverse the river in the north and connect the vast farmland over there with the industrial area
while
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another will lead to some factories. As to facilities, there will be many changes as well. To illustrate,
at the end
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of the road that crosses the eastern factory field, there will be a school.
Additionally
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, on the southwest and the southeast of the large
roundabout
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there will be some shops and a medical centre respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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