The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.
The line graph illustrates the percentages of employees in five European countries who were absent for a day or more
due to
sickness between 1991 and 2001.
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Overall
, Linking Words
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the Netherland’s
Netherland’s
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Netherlands’s
trend
was predominant Use synonyms
in
all year, except for the first Change preposition
apply
one
. The figures of Use synonyms
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the Netherland
Netherland
and Sweden each experienced an increase, with the difference being that the former country’s Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
figure
dipped in the middle of the Use synonyms
period
, Use synonyms
while
that of the latter Linking Words
one
showed consistent growth. The trends of the remaining countries, namely Use synonyms
UK
, Germany, and France, all remained virtually stable, except for France’s, which declined steadily in the first half of the Correct article usage
the UK
period
.
In 1991, just under 5% of workers from Use synonyms
Netherlands
were absent Correct article usage
the Netherlands
at
work Change preposition
from
due to
being ill. Linking Words
Next
year, the number increased to about 5,5%, but started declining steadily in 1993, reaching a point Correct article usage
The next
od
about 4% in 1996. Correct your spelling
of
This
was followed by an increase Linking Words
by
almost 1% in 1997, and Change preposition
of
then
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Linking Words
further
rise; by the end of the Correct article usage
a further
period
, the Use synonyms
figure
stood at nearly 6%. Sweden’s Use synonyms
trend
remained almost unchanged in the first five years, fluctuating between just under and just above 3%. From 1996, the Use synonyms
figure
grew to about 3,2%, and Use synonyms
then
to 3,5% in 1997. The Linking Words
trend
experienced consistent growth Use synonyms
further
in the Linking Words
period
, reaching a point of approximately 5,5% by 2001.
France, whose percentage was Use synonyms
initially
the highest, showed a significant decline in its Linking Words
figure
. In Use synonyms
details
, it started Fix the agreement mistake
detail
with
about 5%, and went up slightly in 1992; but in the next Change preposition
at
year
it dipped by almost 1%, and continued declining until 1996Add a comma
year,
,
when its Remove the comma
apply
figure
had reached a point just above 3%. The number remained completely unchanged for the rest of the Use synonyms
period
.
As for the remaining countries, namely Use synonyms
UK
and Germany, their trends experienced only slight changes. The Correct article usage
the UK
figure
Use synonyms
of
the former Change preposition
for
Use synonyms
one
fluctuated between 2% and just above 2% over the Correct pronoun usage
apply
period
, increasing from 2% in 1991 to about 2,3% in 2001. The Use synonyms
trend
of the latter Use synonyms
one
fluctuated from 2% to just below it all over the Use synonyms
period
, showing a minor decline Use synonyms
by
approximately 0,3% Change preposition
of
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.Use synonyms
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