The table show the results of surveys in a European country, carried out in three different years. Percentage of respondents expressing interest in certain sports .

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, it can be seen that soccer is clearly favoured over any other

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. Meanwhile, there were no significant changes among the five roles. In 1995, 42% of people were interested in football, more than 22% and 30% compared to cycling and tennis orderly. At the same time, the percentage of people interested in swimming stood at 10%,

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the figures for golf and rugby were lower, at the same percentage (8%). Between 1995 and 2005 , the UK saw a significant

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of the period.

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, snooker had a similar trend, with the figure decreasing to 28%;

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figure rose to 30% in 2005.

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, those of golf and rugby increased to 13% and 17% respectively from 1995 to 2005.

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, the figures for tennis and swimming remained almost unchanged in the same period.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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