The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business

 and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons

 where relevant.
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The following graph compares the total investment percentages from three sectors which are agriculture, manufacturing, and banking in the UK.
Overall
, non-banking departments were decreased over time.
On the other hand
, financial sectors have spiked up over the years. In the earliest year,
while
both farming and production divisions had a comparative measure between 40 and 50 per cent, the financial territory had the lowest number of shy below 10 per cent.
However
, in 1950, the situation has changed.
Although
the cultivation section was still rising as the agribusiness did, the manufacturing division fell a bit. In the meantime, the banking sector was still the lowest among them. Later on, in 1975, the production sector, specifically farming and manufacturing dwindled, with a significant drop happening in the cultivation section. Despite the banking part still growing to 20 per cent, the production area still held the highest portion.
In contrast
to the years before, in 2000, after the agronomy and manufacturing department diminished, the increasing amount of the money-dealing district made it become the biggest contributed sector in the UK’s economy
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribution
  • sector
  • economy
  • twentieth century
  • trend
  • decline
  • growth
  • period
  • significant rise
  • factors
  • relative performance
  • dominant
  • comparison
  • analysis
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