The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. https://writing9.com/_next/image?url=https%3A%2F%2Fimages.writing9.com%2F439242545779b921e770dd9c547b55a5.png&w=640&q=75

The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line charts provide key information about the patterns of three
boys
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and girls’
names
which were in the United Kingdom between 1925 and 2000. The units are measured in rate per thousand.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that, all the
names
’ ratios experienced a significant increase over the years.
In addition
. There were different trends in boys’
names
,
whereas
the girls’
names pattern
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were set to be about the same.
According to
what is shown, Daniel’s name was introduced in the graph with about 4 per thousand people.
Then
, it soared until reached the maximum at 12. After that, it declined slightly
just
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over 10 by 2000. Oliver’s and
Alexander
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started with 1 rate and
Oliver
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Oliver's
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name almost disappeared in 1975 after it rose to about 5
where
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Alexander
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fluctuated at that time.
Subsequently
, they both showed substantial growth until the end of the period. In terms of girls’
names
, Emily began with just under 2 per cent,
then
increased to the peak at above 10 by 2000. There was no one with Isabella and Sophia’s
names
before 1975 but they considerably grew over a quarter of a century.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words names with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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