The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart provides information on the demand for

electricity

in England during

winter

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the winter

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and summer seasons.

While

the data is represented in the form of a circle provides information on how

electricity

is

utlized

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utilized

utilised

in an average English home.

Overall

,

it is clear that

during

winter

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the winter

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season the demand for

electricity

significantly

increase

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increases

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throughout different hours of the day, and

the

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a

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large

propotion

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proportion

of

electricity

is used by heating devices. The line chart

represent

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represents

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the

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apply

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how often householders

utlize

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utilise

electricity

in two different periods. During winter, individuals consume large

amout

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amount

amounts

of energy reaching its peak at 500000 units of

electricity

.

While

, during summer, individuals consume large

amout

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amount

amounts

of energy reaching nearly 200000 units of

electricity

during the

afternone

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afternoon

and after 21 at night. The pie chart

represent

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represents

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the different

divices

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devices

that

utlize

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utilise

large

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a large

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amout

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amount

of energy in an average English home.

Large

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A large

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proportion is dedicated

for

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to

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heating, making up 52% of the total. Ovens,Kettles,

Washing

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and Washing

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machines

was

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were

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the second largest, contributing 18%. Other notable

segmantations

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segmentations

segmentation

including

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include

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Lighting, TV, Radio (15%), Vacuum cleaners,

Food

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and Food

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Mixers (9%).