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The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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According to
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 these
principals
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principles
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, having a chill climate is better
to construct
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than constructing
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 your house with materials that give heat without having insulation, which results in the opposite of cool,
meanwhile
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 warm climate variates
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whether
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 it is day or night.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • thermal mass
  • insulation
  • ventilation
  • draft
  • heat dissipation
  • exposure to sunlight
  • extended eaves
  • overhangs
  • reflective materials
  • south-facing
  • north-facing
  • porches
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