The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
image illustrates the basics of house architecture for warm and cool weather .
According to
these principals
, having a chill climate is better Correct your spelling
principles
to construct
your house with materials that give heat without having insulation, which results in the opposite of cool, Change preposition
than constructing
meanwhile
warm climate variates Add a comma
meanwhile,
wether
it is day or night.Correct your spelling
whether
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