The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The graph illustrates

production

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levels of three main fuels (

petroleum

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, natural gas, and coal)in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Units are measured in millions of

tonnes

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Overall

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petroleum

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was the dominant

fuels sources

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fuel source

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throughout

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the period despite fluctuation,

while

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natural gas

was saw

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steady

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a steady

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rise, eventually,

petroleum

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becoming

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became

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the

most

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highest in 2000.

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, coal

production

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was

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apply

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declined

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for

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many years until

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apply

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2000 in the UK. On the one hand,

petroleum

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production

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began at approximately 100

million

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tonnes

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, after that it went up in1986

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140

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tonnes

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Following

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this

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peak, it decreased by about 100

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tonnes

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by 1991, after that it increased in 2000 mainly 140

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tonnes

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, the

production

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of natural gas started

moved

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in 1981

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with

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million

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tonnes

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, and

then

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it was steadiness

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for

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19 years until a ceiled

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trend

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in 1991 to 2000 around 100

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tonnes

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, the most improved in 2000 was

petroleum

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in the UK.

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, coal

production

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started at around 80

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tonnes

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, and

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it collapsed in 1984

about

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million

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tonnes

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, and

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coal improved in 1986 by 60

million

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tonnes

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. Following that graph, coal declined to 2000 around 30

million

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tonnes

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in the

last

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year and it was the lowest in the graph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, tonnes, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

221 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

production levels
main kinds of fuel
UK
coal
oil
natural gas
nuclear power
period of increase
period of decrease
stability
significant peaks
declines
growth trends
slumps
rapid growth
overall trends
move towards
move away from
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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

Some people argue that exams put too much pressure on university students, but others think that dealing with pressure is an essential skill to develop before people begin employment. Discuss both sides of the argument and present your opinion.

The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.