The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The graph illustrates
production
levels of three main fuels (
petroleum
, natural gas, and coal)in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Units are measured in millions of
tonnes
.
Overall
,
petroleum
was the dominant
fuels sources
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throughout
in
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the period despite fluctuation,
while
natural gas
was saw
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steady
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a steady
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rise, eventually,
petroleum
becoming
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the
most
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highest in 2000.
Conversely
, coal
production
was
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declined
in
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many years until
it
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2000 in the UK. On the one hand,
petroleum
production
began at approximately 100
million
tonnes
, after that it went up in1986
around
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140
million
tonnes
.
Following
this
peak, it decreased by about 100
million
tonnes
by 1991, after that it increased in 2000 mainly 140
million
tonnes
.
Likewise
, the
production
of natural gas started
moved
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in 1981
by
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40
million
tonnes
, and
then
it was steadiness
to
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19 years until a ceiled
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trend
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in 1991 to 2000 around 100
million
tonnes
.
Finally
, the most improved in 2000 was
petroleum
in the UK.
On the other hand
, coal
production
started at around 80
million
tonnes
, and
then
it collapsed in 1984
about
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40
million
tonnes
, and
then
coal improved in 1986 by 60
million
tonnes
. Following that graph, coal declined to 2000 around 30
million
tonnes
in the
last
year and it was the lowest in the graph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, tonnes, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • UK
  • coal
  • oil
  • natural gas
  • nuclear power
  • period of increase
  • period of decrease
  • stability
  • significant peaks
  • declines
  • growth trends
  • slumps
  • rapid growth
  • overall trends
  • move towards
  • move away from
  • overtook
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