Some people think that manufactures and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging.

It is a popular thought that

manufactures

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manufacturers

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, supermarkets and stores have the responsibility to sell

products

that have less packaging

while

others argue that

cityzen

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citizens

citizen

are responsible for buying fewer packaged

product

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products

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.

This

essay will discuss both

side

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sides

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and give

opinion

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an opinion

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that it is the

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and

seller

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sellers

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that

responsible

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are responsible

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for the packaging. On the one hand, using packaging can protect the

products

and avoid breaking

the

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apply

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things even in accidents. Market and

producer

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producers

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using

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use

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many packaging

also

to prevent the possibility that someone might accidentally drop the

product

and break it as they wander around the store and

this

is a benefit for both sellers and

the

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consumers. Packaging

also

makes

products

look more

profssional

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professional

for special events and

also

attract

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attracts

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more customers,

this

will help increase the selling rate of the

products

.

On the other hand

,

use

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using

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many packaging can lead to many problems, one of them

is

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being

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pollution and

enviromental

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environmental

problems.

Due to

the fact that people

nowaday

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nowadays

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usually throw the packaging away after

bring

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bringing

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things home and because of

this

it will become a dangerous factor for

the

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nature when packaging today usually

make

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made

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from plastic and

nilon

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nylon

.

For example

, if a customer

choose

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chooses

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to buy a less packed

product

or

products

that use packing that

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is freindly

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freindly

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friendly

to

th enviroment

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the environment

, it will be less

harm

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harmful

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than the

product

use

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that use

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nilon

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nylon

and plastic packaging. If consumers

alway

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always

choose less packed

products

then

the seller will

mnotice

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notice

and soon change the packaging so that the

product

can be bought. Another thing is that

sometime

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sometimes

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people can not choose a less packaging

product

if the

product

they need all have many packaging. So it is the

manufactors

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manufacturers

and stores that are responsible for

this

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these

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problems.

Thus

, both the producer and customers have the responsibility

to

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for

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this

issue, i hold to the belief that the

manufactures

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manufacturers

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are the main factors

to

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reponsible

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responsible

for

this

.