The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given designs illustrate how houses are built in times of cool and warm climates. To summarise, there are two distinct designs for both climates, which can be differentiated by the shape of the roofs.
On
Change preposition
In
cool
climate, it can be seen that Correct article usage
a cool
roof
has a high angle, allowing the sun to directly enter the room through the window. Correct article usage
the roof
Moreover
, the room was built with a thermal material, which will decrease the heat loss.
For the warm climate, the roof was designed like a pyramid shape to Linking Words
overhangs
the shade when it was a day time. Wrong verb form
overhang
However
, Linking Words
on
Change preposition
at
the
night time, the room has a ventilation feature that will Correct article usage
apply
removed
excess heat Change the verb form
remove
which
stored during the day.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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