There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to explain about
the Change preposition
apply
bus
service
problem, we are
confronting Wrong verb form
have been
from
the past two weeks. I am James and I live Change preposition
for
in
near Change preposition
apply
city
Correct article usage
the city
center
mall, Mumbai. The Rainbow transport Change the spelling
centre
service
bus
number ME-1527 is pick up me daily at morning 8.AM, last
2 to 3 weeks the bus
is not coming to the actual time. Sometimes it did not come to the boarding for us.
Thus
, I cannot go the
office at Change preposition
to the
correct
time not only Add an article
the correct
a correct
me
in my area Correct pronoun usage
apply
there
are most working women Correct pronoun usage
apply
all
are facing the same problem. Nowadays Correct pronoun usage
apply
city
is having more traffic Add an article
the city
crisis
during Fix the agreement mistake
crises
the
office hours. If the Correct article usage
apply
bus
is not coming to
the correct time everyone who Change preposition
at
are rely
on Wrong verb form
relies
this
bus
service
will be suffer
.
Change the verb form
suffer
Furthermore
, as a manager of the rainbow
transport Capitalize word
Rainbow
service
you will understand our problems. So kindly scrutinize Add a comma
service,
this
issue and resolve it as soon as possible.
Regards
JamesSubmitted by smsundaram57 on
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coherence
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grammar
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task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task, providing a description of the problem, its effects, and suggestions for improvement.
tone
Your tone is appropriately formal and respectful, which is suitable when writing to a company manager.