The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#diagrams #show #principles #house #design #climates #information #features #comparisons

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The illustrated diagram represents two house building plans describing the difference between the cool & hot climates

homes

by showing their features.

Overall

, the diagram describes,

homes

Correct word choice

that homes

show examples

builded

Correct your spelling

built

show examples

for cold generally restrict

heat

to go

Change preposition

from going

show examples

out.

While

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

homes

for hot climates are

desgined

Correct your spelling

designed

descipate

Correct your spelling

dissipate

heat

more efficiently. The other

noticing

Correct word choice

noticeable

show examples

difference would be the

insulation

; for winter climate

insulation

is used on all walls,

while

for warm houses it is only used on

roof

Add an article

the roof

a roof

show examples

To Begin

with,

Homes

builded

Correct your spelling

built

show examples

for cold

climate

Fix the agreement mistake

climates

show examples

reduce

heat

lose

Replace the word

loss

show examples

through

Change preposition

show examples

using

Add an article

a high

the high

show examples

high angled

Add a hyphen

high-angled

show examples

roof

Fix the agreement mistake

roofs

show examples

, using thermal material and

insulation

and

Change preposition

apply

show examples

letting sunlight enter the house.

On the other hand

, houses made for warm

climate

Fix the agreement mistake

climates

show examples

descipate

Correct your spelling

dissipate

heat

in the night by improving ventilation and using big windows.

However

, for the day, houses

are build

Change the verb form

are built

show examples

with overhanging

roof

shades, with

heat

insulation

on the

roof

and reflective

roof

material.

Submitted by nick on Thu Jun 13 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words homes, heat, insulation, roof with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

▼

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

145 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

thermal mass
insulation
ventilation
draft
heat dissipation
exposure to sunlight
extended eaves
overhangs
reflective materials
south-facing
north-facing
porches

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
IELTS essay, topic: Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The two pie charts compares the sources of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005. Overall, equal quantities of both years produced gas and coal, but a dramatically larger number of Petro was in 1995. There were also many differences in values nuclear and other kinds of energy production.
5.5
band
A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. Give detail of the course you took at the University. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing with regard toyour choice of University course.
4.5
band
Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
It is true that there is a deleterious impact on earth and animals owing to human actions. A number of people believe that this situation is unchangeable, while a vast majority of people argue that significant measures should be adopted so that world and animals can be protected. I firmly assume that conducive steps would be undertaken by the government to ameliorate this problem. This study will endeavor to explore the reasons and possible solutions for protecting the earth and its species.
5
band
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
In the modern world, many people are concerned about discovering the background of their residence. This essay will analyze the reason for this interest as well as the ways that people can look for the previous stories of that place.
5
band
In some countries good school and medical facilities are available in city only. Some people think that teachers and good hospital, education should be provided in rural areas for few years. While some people think that every person is free to do work according to their choice. Discuss your ideas and opinion. Discuss both the sides.
NOWADAYS, BETTER EDUCATION AND HEALTHCARE SYSTEM ARE ACCESSIBLE ONLY IN CITIES. SOME PEOPLE CLAIM THAT NOT ONLY CITIES, BUT ALSO RURAL AREAS SHOULD HAVE ACCESS TO SCHOOLS AND MEDICAL SYSTEM, WHILE OTHERS SAY THAT IT DEPENDS ON INDIVIDUAL'S CHOICE ,AS THEY ARE INDEPENDENT. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS IN SUPPORT OF FORMER.

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS essay, topic: Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?