The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrated diagram represents two house building plans describing the difference between the cool & hot climates

homes

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by showing their features.

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, the diagram describes,

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homes

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that homes

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builded

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built

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for cold generally restrict

heat

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to go

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from going

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out.

While

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apply

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homes

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for hot climates are

desgined

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designed

descipate

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dissipate

heat

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more efficiently. The other

noticing

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noticeable

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difference would be the

insulation

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; for winter climate

insulation

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is used on all walls,

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for warm houses it is only used on

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roof

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the roof

a roof

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To Begin

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with,

Homes

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builded

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built

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for cold

climate

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climates

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reduce

heat

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lose

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loss

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through

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using

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a high

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high angled

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high-angled

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roof

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roofs

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, using thermal material and

insulation

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and

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apply

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letting sunlight enter the house.

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, houses made for warm

climate

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climates

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descipate

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dissipate

heat

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in the night by improving ventilation and using big windows.

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, for the day, houses

are build

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are built

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with overhanging

roof

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shades, with

heat

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insulation

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on the

roof

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and reflective

roof

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material.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words homes, heat, insulation, roof with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

145 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

thermal mass
insulation
ventilation
draft
heat dissipation
exposure to sunlight
extended eaves
overhangs
reflective materials
south-facing
north-facing
porches

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The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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