The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustrated diagram represents two house building plans describing the difference between the cool & hot climates

homes

by showing their features.

Overall

, the diagram describes,

homes

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that homes

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builded

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built

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for cold generally restrict

heat

to go

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from going

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out.

While

,

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apply

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homes

for hot climates are

desgined

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designed

to

descipate

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dissipate

heat

more efficiently. The other

noticing

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noticeable

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difference would be the

insulation

; for winter climate

insulation

is used on all walls,

while

for warm houses it is only used on

roof

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the roof

a roof

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.

To Begin

with,

Homes

builded

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built

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for cold

climate

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climates

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reduce

heat

lose

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loss

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through

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by

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using

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a high

the high

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high angled

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high-angled

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roof

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roofs

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, using thermal material and

insulation

and

by

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apply

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letting sunlight enter the house.

On the other hand

, houses made for warm

climate

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climates

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,

descipate

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dissipate

heat

in the night by improving ventilation and using big windows.

However

, for the day, houses

are build

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are built

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with overhanging

roof

shades, with

heat

insulation

on the

roof

and reflective

roof

material.