The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram presents information related to how
food
chain Correct article usage
the food
produced
in Add a missing verb
is produced
United
States. Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the process includes several steps, commencing with food
production and culminating in delivering to the restaurants and households.
The initial step focuses on collecting raw food
materials from various resources such
as seafood, milk or vegetables to meet human’s
demand. After that, collected Change noun form
human
food
was put into machine
and processed to remove harmful bacteria, ensuring the quality of it before transporting Add an article
the machine
a machine
to
distribution by trucks.
Moving to the next step, distributed ingredients are divided into two ways for selling, including restaurants and wholesalers Correct pronoun usage
it to
such
as supermarket
or Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
market
, where they can be consumed in different ways. In the final step, Fix the agreement mistake
markets
food
can be used to prepare meals at home for families and it can also
be cooked and served to diners in a restaurants
or at Correct the article-noun agreement
a restaurant
restaurants
in
Change preposition
apply
a buffets
.Correct the article-noun agreement
a buffet
buffets
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