The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or collage lecturer.
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The two different images provide information about eight different professional groups. The bar chart illustrates the working
hours
in the eight different professional fields. Whereas
, the pie graph describes the stress
level within these occupations.
Overall
, the bar chart shows that businessmen have more working hours
than others. Whereas
, lecturers are doing the least work. However
, in pie graph indicates stress
levels and in this
lectures are at a high level of stress
and programmers are less distressed.
The bar chart shows that out of eight Change to a plural noun
professions
profession
a greater number of Add a comma
profession,
hours
are allocated to businessmen about 70 hours
per week
they serve. In contrast
, lectures spend less time approximately about 25 hours
per week
. Other shows have little variations but among all other movie makers are at second higher rant of spending more hours
per week
about 60 hours
per week
and then
lies doctors about 50 hours
per week
, and writers about 45 hours
respectively.
The pie graph shows that about 25% of lectures are going through high level
of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
stress
and taking tension as compared to this
writers take much less tension about 5% only.Submitted by aimenmalik2021 on
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