The pie chart below shows the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.

The pie chart below shows the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The two pie charts compare the professions occupied by the citizens in one of the towns in the
UK
(Ashby) and the
UK
as a whole in 2008.
Overall
, the top three famous occupations in Ashby are personal service,
office
work
, and construction
work
.
On the other hand
, the
UK
as a whole has technical
work
, personal service and the highest percentage is
office
work
.
According to
the information in Ashby town people likely
work
in personal services at 21%
then
office
work
at 18% and construction at 16%, Moving fouther, Unemployed and shop
work
are pretty equal at 14% and the lowest percentage are professional
work
and technical
work
by 8% and 9%. In the whole
UK
, people likely to
work
at an
office
workers 19% is the highest ratio,
then
technical
work
and personal service both at 17%, Moving
further
, professional
work
is14%, shop
work
at 13% and both construction
work
and unemployed
work
is 10%.
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