The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.
The line graph data on the manufacturing of pulp, timber and paper between 1980 and 2000 years in the European region.
Overall
, paper and timber experienced a lot of changes between 1980 and 2000 years,
while
pulp almost stayed without changes.
To begin
with pulp, in 1980, it started with 6
million
tonnes
and experienced a decrease to almost 2
million
, which in the 1985
year
increased to 7
million
and was followed by little increases until 1995 and in the 2000
year
it reached almost 10
million
tonnes
. Regarding timber, the starting point was 5
million
tonnes
, which suddenly increased to exactly 10
million
,
however
in 1990 it fell to 8
million
.
Then
it again dropped to approximately 6
million
tonnes
in 1995 and again rose to 8
million
.
Finally
paper began with only 4
million
tonnes
,
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and
year
by
year
it grew to nearly 9
million
in
the
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1995
year
, and
as a result
, it reached 12
million
in 2000,
although
between these years it was followed by a small decrease.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Timber production
  • Pulp production
  • Paper production
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Technological advances
  • Demand
  • Market demand
  • Sustainable practices
  • Deforestation
  • Production levels
  • Comparisons
  • Trends
  • Policy changes
  • Patterns
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