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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.
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The line graph data on the manufacturing of pulp, timber and paper between 1980 and 2000 years in the European region.
Overall
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, paper and timber experienced a lot of changes between 1980 and 2000 years,
while
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 pulp almost stayed without changes.
To begin
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 with pulp, in 1980, it started with 6
million
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tonnes
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 and experienced a decrease to almost 2
million
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, which in the 1985
year
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 increased to 7
million
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 and was followed by little increases until 1995 and in the 2000
year
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 it reached almost 10
million
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tonnes
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. Regarding timber, the starting point was 5
million
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tonnes
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, which suddenly increased to exactly 10
million
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,
however
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 in 1990 it fell to 8
million
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.
Then
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 it again dropped to approximately 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 1995 and again rose to 8
million
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.
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 paper began with only 4
million
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tonnes
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,
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 and
year
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 by
year
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 it grew to nearly 9
million
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 in
the
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1995
year
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, and
as a result
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, it reached 12
million
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 in 2000,
although
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 between these years it was followed by a small decrease.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Timber production
  • Pulp production
  • Paper production
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Technological advances
  • Demand
  • Market demand
  • Sustainable practices
  • Deforestation
  • Production levels
  • Comparisons
  • Trends
  • Policy changes
  • Patterns
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