The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below depicts energy generation by fuel type in the UK in two years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
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pie charts compare percentages of
energy
products by fuel base in two different years(2014 and 2018) in the United Kingdom.
overall
, gas was the popular resource
energy
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in the UK, yet Oil and other things had less percentage, and the amount of
renewables
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energy
was increasing, but Coal and Nuclear reduced.
According to
the generated
energy
Diagrams, in both years Gas was the main source of
energy
that
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had the same
percentages
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equal to 30.1
percent
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for
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.
In addition
, Coal and Nuclear were the second and third in 2014, so the proportions were 28.4 and 22.5
percent
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, but these mounts had roughly 10
percent
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and 1 decline respectively in 2018.
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, Fortunately, in 2014 the percentage of Renewables in
energy
was 15
percent
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also
was the fourth type of
energy
generation ;
Further
in 2018
this
approximately
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11
percent
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rising and
getting
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the second level. Oil in two years had 4
percent
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • energy generation
  • fuel type
  • traditional fuels
  • renewable energy
  • alternative fuels
  • significant increase
  • substantial decrease
  • transition fuel
  • environmental policies
  • notable changes
  • share of energy
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