The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage of change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage of change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The chart illustrates the export earnings in
billion
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dollars
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broken up into five categories between 2015 and 2016,
while
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the table shows the growth in percentages during the same period.
First,
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in 2015,
petroleum
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products
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were the biggest category, accounting for 60
billion
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dollars
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, followed by engineered goods, accounting for approximately 57
billion
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dollars
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.
However
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, in 2016, engineered goods increased by 8.5% and almost achieved the
petroleum
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products
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level of export, which showed only 3% growth.
Second,
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gems and jewellery were the only category that decreased by 5.18%, from roughly 42 to 41
billion
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dollars
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.
Finally
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, textiles from being the smallest category after a 15.24% rise almost achieved the agricultural
products
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level of around 30
billion
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dollars
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,
however
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, remained half compared to
petroleum
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products
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.
Overall
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, comparing the level of export earnings between 2015 and 2016 it is easy to see that all categories increased except gems and jewellery, which decreased.
Petroleum
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products
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and engineered goods were the biggest categories,
while
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agriculture
products
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and textiles were the smallest. The biggest growth was noticed in textiles,
while
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the smallest
in
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was in
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agricultural
products
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars, petroleum, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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