The graph below shows the percentage of adults whose healthcare need went unmet in the past year from 2008 to 2022 in 6 different European nations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the rate of adults

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did not care about their

heath

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health

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between the

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2008 and 2022 in 6 European nations. In brief, We can demonstrate that each

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applied a specific change during the

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. Education fluctuated as health had a massive increase and defence decreased significantly. Starting off with health, it applied a slight increase in the

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1955 and 1979 as it

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rose considerably till the year 2019 at approximately a quarter. Education had a variation change throughout the

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, it did not apply any increase

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decrease. Defence was really important

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the year 1955 it was roughly one quarter as it

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dropped

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to almost 10%

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fluctuates

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coming 3

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again.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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123 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unmet healthcare needs
Percentage of adults
Trend analysis
Significant increase/decrease
Comparative overview
Consistent patterns
Economic status
Healthcare systems
Policy changes
Anomalies in data
Year-by-year comparison
Rising/declining trend
Evaluate improvements
External factors

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The graph below shows the percentage of adults whose healthcare need went unmet in the past year from 2008 to 2022 in 6 different European nations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make coparisons where relevant.

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