The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process of transferring coal into a source of electricity. The process contains 8 steps, starting from collecting coal from the mine to distributing it to homes and industries.
Firstly
, the coal is collected from the mine and transferred to the crusher turning it into smaller pieces. Then
it will be transported via vehicle or truck to the gasifier. In the gasifier, the crushed coal will turn into gas
, which will produce a solid waste. Following
this
, the gas
will be directed to a cooler to generate a gas
power plant.
Lastly
, the gas
power plant will be used as a form of electricity in homes and industries.
Overall
, the process contains several steps, commencing with the collection of coal and ending with the distribution of energy.Submitted by marammajid1999 on
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