The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps display the different changes that happened In Westley town since 1815 .
buildings have been added since
Overall
most of the buildings had changed . but a lot of new modern facilitiesCorrect word choice
and
such
as the cinema and West Gait shopping centre instead
of the church and even replaced the old coach in with a sports centre and the museum just next to it .
A noticeable defiance is noted. in the addition of new roads and the train line crossing through the river twine at the same point as the old twine toll bridge . the railway station just opposite the cinema that was built in the old fields.
The lord westley
house has been decided to the Red Lion and the Lenton Hotel.the old Lenton Woods has turned into Change the capitalization
Westley
Lenton
housing estate, Correct article usage
a Lenton
while
the old houses are now divided into both business and residential areas.Submitted by fatimahalsalman215 on
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