The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph presents the worldwide sales of hybrid automobiles from 2006 to 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the United States of America was the dominant in the years between 2006 and 2008.
However
, in 2009, the highest was
Japan
.
Japan
and other nations were growing in
these four-year period
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. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that
Japan
and other regions were very close in the first three years, but in 2009,
Japan
's sales figures increased suddenly. It gained about 240,000 in one year. A downward trend can be observed in America during the
year
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years
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2007 to 2009. In the beginning, the United States's performance accounted
more
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than 60% of
this
market, but in 2009, it was only around 40%,
due to
the rise of Japanese sales. In 2006, the number of the US report was 250,000, and in the next year, it became 350,000. That was a big improvement for
this
country, but in the following years, the data was not good.
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