The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category compared in 2016 with 2015
The information on
export
revenue during 2015 and 2016 in various product categories, including Petroleum products
, Engineered goods, Gems and Jewellery, Agricultural products
, and Textiles, are provided in the chart. The table shows the percentage change in values for each category in the same period of time.
Overall
, Petroleum products
attributed the highest export
earnings
for both years of the period. Most of the categories figures
an increasing change in values except Gems and Jewelry, Verb problem
show
whereas
Textiles appeared as the highest percentage of change during 2015 and 2016.
It can be seen that the export
of petroleum goods earned approximately 63 billion
dollars
in 2016, increased by 3% from last
year
Change noun form
year's
earnings
at roughly 60 billion
dollars
and commanded the highest export
revenue compared with other categories for the period of time. The increasing trend of export
revenue emerged for some other products
including Engineered which gained 61 billion
dollars
in 2016, surpassed last
year’s earnings
with less than 60 billion
dollars
by an 8,5% increment, while
Agricultural products
earnings
rose 0.81% by more than 30 billion
of dollar for both years. Textiles emerged the most significant changes in value, earned 25 billion
dollars
in 2015, increased
by 15.24% to 32 Correct word choice
and increased
billion
dollars
in 2016. On the other hand
, Gems and jewellery witnessed a lower trend, dropped
by 5.18% from 2015 to 2016.Wrong verb form
dropping
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