The charts below show what UK graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The charts below show what UK graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The two charts
shows
Change the verb form
show
show examples
the difference between the
graduates
Fix the agreement mistake
graduate
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students
and the
postgraduates
Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduate
show examples
students
in the following things part-time work , voluntary work and
further
study The
graduates
Change to a genitive case
graduate's
graduates'
show examples
student chart shows the most
students
went to
further
studies
however
there
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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just 3500
students
went
Correct pronoun usage
who went
show examples
to voluntary work
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • statistic
  • unemployed
  • voluntary
  • postgraduate
  • part-time work
  • graduate students
  • full-time work
  • enroll
  • higher education
  • alternative career paths
  • trend
  • not engaged in full-time employment
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