The charts below show what UK graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The two charts
shows
the difference between the Change the verb form
show
graduates
Fix the agreement mistake
graduate
students
and the postgraduates
Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduate
students
in the following things part-time work , voluntary work and further
study
The graduates
student chart shows the most Change to a genitive case
graduate's
graduates'
students
went to further
studies however
there is
just 3500 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
students
went
to voluntary workCorrect pronoun usage
who went
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