The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the total
number
of
visitors
to three London museums (
British
Museum
, Science
Museum
, and Natural History
Museum
), in the period from June to
September
2013.
Overall
,the
visitors
to the
British
Museum
were the most all over the given period of time,
while
the Science
Museum
attracted the fewest
visitors
over the period.
In addition
, the three Museums were witnessed increasing
at the end
of the time given
Firstly
, the graph shows that the
British
Museum
experienced fluctuations and reached its peak in July (around 750,000)
visitors
.
Furthermore
, in August the
number
of
visitors
to the
British
Museum
decreased to 500,00. After that in
September
, the
number
of
visitors
rose again to approximately 650,000.
Secondly
, the Natural History
Museum
had a dramatic decline from more than 500,00
visitors
in June to almost 400,000
visitors
in July. After that, the
number
of
visitors
increased to more than 450,000 in
September
.
Finally
,The Science
Museum
had a consistent decrease from June to August when the
Museum
recorded the lowest
number
of
visitors
300,000.
Then
, the
number
of attracted
visitors
reached ( around 450,000 in
September
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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