The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the total
number
of visitors
to three London museums ( British
Museum
, Science Museum
, and Natural History Museum
), in the period from June to September
2013.
Overall
,the visitors
to the British
Museum
were the most all over the given period of time, while
the Science Museum
attracted the fewest visitors
over the period. In addition
, the three Museums were witnessed increasing at the end
of the time given
Firstly
, the graph shows that the British
Museum
experienced fluctuations and reached its peak in July (around 750,000) visitors
.Furthermore
, in August the number
of visitors
to the British
Museum
decreased to 500,00. After that in September
, the number
of visitors
rose again to approximately 650,000.
Secondly
, the Natural History Museum
had a dramatic decline from more than 500,00 visitors
in June to almost 400,000 visitors
in July. After that, the number
of visitors
increased to more than 450,000 in September
.
Finally
,The Science Museum
had a consistent decrease from June to August when the Museum
recorded the lowest number
of visitors
300,000. Then
, the number
of attracted visitors
reached ( around 450,000 in September
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