The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the town centre infrastructure changes in 1990 and today.
Overall
, even though there are several developments over the given period, the Childcare Centre, Town Hall, Library and Park remain where they were. This
is the result of adapting to local needs and conveniences.
Firstly
, the combination of newsagent’s
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newsagents
grocer’s
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grocers
baker’s
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bakers
butcher’s
and café, which are located on the left of the Childcare centre, has been replaced by the Shopping Mall. Cars are no longer allowed on Smith Street, where the above are, as Change noun form
butcher
this
is the high foot traffic area. Furthermore
, the Bank on the East of the Town Hall has been replaced by a Café, and a new footpath has been drawn in this
area so cars can give way to pedestrians. Complexes of houses on Green Street were demolished, and multiple apartments blocked have been built over the 3 decades. As this
is a residential area, footpath
is Correct article usage
a footpath
also
added on Green Street for local safety.Submitted by midden-02.tore on
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