The diagram illustrates the process of production sugar in a specific plant (sugar cane).

The diagram below illustrates the production process for making

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from

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cane.

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, growing

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cane is the crucial step in making the

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; harvesting comes

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followed by the crushing of the

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canes

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. The next steps involve the chemical processes that are usually done in a factory and the result. In the first 12–18 months, the

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canes

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grown and made into a weedy sort of plant.

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, a farmer comes and yields the canes with a tractor, crushing them with all mighty power. The juice is later extracted and sent

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the factory, where the workers purify the juice with limestone water. After it sterilizes, it is evaporated with heat, and the juice becomes a sticky prodigy that we call

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syrup. Later,

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it is still hot, it is centrifuged, separating

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crystals from the syrup, and sent into the drying and cooling bin, where one waits for a bit. After waiting for it to cool down

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when dipping a finger into the sticky maple syrup and tasting the finished product, one’s eyes fill with adrenaline, and the

savoring

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taste fills the taste buds, making a bold statement that the

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is here.