The diagram illustrates the process of production sugar in a specific plant (sugar cane).
The diagram below illustrates the production process for making
sugar
from sugar
cane.
Overall
, growing sugar
cane is the crucial step in making the sugar
; harvesting comes next,
followed by the crushing of the sugar
canes
. The next steps involve the chemical processes that are usually done in a factory and the result.
In the first 12–18 months, the Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
canes
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cane
are being
grown and made into a weedy sort of plant. Wrong verb form
is
Then
, a farmer comes and yields the canes with a tractor, crushing them with all mighty power. The juice is later extracted and sent into
the factory, where the workers purify the juice with limestone water. After it sterilizes, it is evaporated with heat, and the juice becomes a sticky prodigy that we call Change preposition
to
a
syrup.
Later, Correct article usage
apply
while
it is still hot, it is centrifuged, separating sugar
crystals from the syrup, and sent into the drying and cooling bin, where one waits for a bit. After waiting for it to cool down,
when dipping a finger into the sticky maple syrup and tasting the finished product, one’s eyes fill with adrenaline, and the Remove the comma
apply
savoring
taste fills the taste buds, making a bold statement that the Change the spelling
savouring
sugar
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