The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a bar chart depicting the number of destinations of UK graduate and postgraduate students in 2008.
Overall
, it is evident that most of them eventually pursue higher education. Some of them also
participated in part-time jobs or became unemployed. volunteerism was the most unappreciated choice for individuals.
As can be seen in the graph, the most popular decision was taking further
study. There were around 30 thousand graduate students and approximately 2,700 individuals who chose this
option. The second popular choice for both graduates and postgraduates was engaging in part-time jobs. For postgraduates, the number was 2,535, which is just under the number of seeking further
study. Moreover
, there were around 18 thousand individuals participating in part-time jobs.
There is an opposite trend in voluntary work. Only 345 postgraduates decide to do this
job. Even if there are 3,500 graduates who chose it, this
option was still with the least students chosen.Submitted by weber61543 on
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