The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#show #uk #graduate #student #work #college #summarise #information #features #comparisons

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The first bar diagram shows four types of endeavour of

Use synonyms

graduates

Use synonyms

who did not take a full-time job in 2008. The

later

Correct your spelling

latter

show examples

displays the same topic but for the

Use synonyms

postgraduates.

Overall

Linking Words

, applying for

further

Linking Words

study is the most popular

answers

Fix the agreement mistake

answer

show examples

for

Use synonyms

graduates

Use synonyms

with 29,665 students. Comes in second place is Part-time

work

Use synonyms

with 17,735

graduates

Use synonyms

being

number

Correct article usage

the number

show examples

two

Change preposition

apply

show examples

endeavour that the

graduates

Use synonyms

took after

graduate

Change the verb form

graduating

show examples

from university. Unemployment

become

Wrong verb form

became

show examples

number three with 16,235

graduates

Use synonyms

, which is slightly lower than part-time

work

Use synonyms

. The least desirable endeavour for

graduates

Use synonyms

is voluntary

work

Use synonyms

with only 3,500 in numbers.

This

Linking Words

trend

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

also

Linking Words

happened for

Use synonyms

postgraduates,

which

Correct word choice

where

show examples

further

Linking Words

study

become

Wrong verb form

became

show examples

the number one option with 2,725 in numbers. Similar

with

Change preposition

show examples

the

Use synonyms

graduates

Change to a genitive case

graduate's

graduates'

show examples

data, part-time

job

Fix the agreement mistake

jobs

show examples

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

also

Linking Words

come

Wrong verb form

came

show examples

in second place with 2,535 students

took

Wrong verb form

taking

show examples

this

Linking Words

option.

Moreover

Linking Words

, unemployment is in the third position with 1,625 postgraduates and the

last

Linking Words

position is still voluntary

work

Use synonyms

with only 345 people.

Submitted by arsyiiimuhammad061 on Sun Jun 16 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, further".

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, graduates, work with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

▼

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
In this contemporary epoch, a part of society believes that people are born with talent while others say that teenagers can be made talented at a young age. This conversation has sparked controversy, with both advocates and critics presenting valid arguments and will subsequently lead to a conclusion.
4
band
Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The purpose of this essay is to express my opinion about the topic of whether advertising persuading us to buy different items. Frankly speaking, the discussion of such kind has become easier than ever before for the people who try to communicate and understand each other’s point of view. In order to convey my thoughts about the question under consideration it is reasonable to observe various perspectives of views about advertising.
7.5
band
It is believed that citizens should pay tax to show their social responsibility. Others believe citizens should take other responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the current world, some people believe that society should take social action through tax payments, while others think otherwise. From my perspective, there are some truths for both views. The following paragraphs will clarify my stance.
7
band
Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A controversial discussion point in today's society is whether good teachers need to acquire sufficient training, however, others argue that experiences can improve their teaching abilities. This essay will discuss both arguments and provide my own opinion.
6.5
band
Some people believe that adventurous travel experiences can significantly enhance personal growth and development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, people travel more in comparison with last decades. Although some opine that go on trips which are in the adventurous category can positively affect people's evolutionary flourishing, there is another group who claims that personal thriving is not influenced by such kind of trips. I agree with the first perspective and this argument will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that citizens should pay tax to show their social responsibility. Others believe citizens should take other responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that adventurous travel experiences can significantly enhance personal growth and development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?