The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first bar diagram shows four types of endeavour of

graduates

who did not take a full-time job in 2008. The

later

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latter

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displays the same topic but for the

postgraduates.

Overall

, applying for

further

study is the most popular

answers

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answer

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for

graduates

with 29,665 students. Comes in second place is Part-time

work

with 17,735

graduates

being

number

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the number

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two

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apply

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endeavour that the

graduates

took after

graduate

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graduating

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from university. Unemployment

become

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became

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number three with 16,235

graduates

, which is slightly lower than part-time

work

. The least desirable endeavour for

graduates

is voluntary

work

with only 3,500 in numbers.

This

trend

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apply

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also

happened for

postgraduates,

which

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where

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further

study

become

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became

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the number one option with 2,725 in numbers. Similar

with

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the

graduates

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graduate's

graduates'

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data, part-time

job

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jobs

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Unnecessary verb

apply

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also

come

Wrong verb form

came

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in second place with 2,535 students

took

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taking

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this

option.

Moreover

, unemployment is in the third position with 1,625 postgraduates and the

last

position is still voluntary

work

with only 345 people.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

160 words

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