The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar diagram shows four types of endeavour of
UK
graduates
who did not take a full-time job in 2008. The later
displays the same topic but for the Correct your spelling
latter
UK
postgraduates.
Overall
, applying for further
study is the most popular answers
for Fix the agreement mistake
answer
UK
graduates
with 29,665 students. Comes in second place is Part-time work
with 17,735 graduates
being number
two Correct article usage
the number
of
endeavour that the Change preposition
apply
graduates
took after graduate
from university. Unemployment Change the verb form
graduating
become
number three with 16,235 Wrong verb form
became
graduates
, which is slightly lower than part-time work
. The least desirable endeavour for graduates
is voluntary work
with only 3,500 in numbers.
This
trend is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
happened for UK
postgraduates, which
Correct word choice
where
further
study become
the number one option with 2,725 in numbers. Similar Wrong verb form
became
with
the Change preposition
to
graduates
data, part-time Change to a genitive case
graduate's
graduates'
job
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
come
in second place with 2,535 students Wrong verb form
came
took
Wrong verb form
taking
this
option. Moreover
, unemployment is in the third position with 1,625 postgraduates and the last
position is still voluntary work
with only 345 people.Submitted by arsyiiimuhammad061 on
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