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The first pie chart below shows European Union member state shares of installed capacity of renewable egergy for last year. The second pie chart below shows the breakdown for Germany's sources of renewable energy, also for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first pie chart below shows European Union member state shares of installed capacity of renewable egergy for last year. The second pie chart below shows the breakdown for Germany's sources of renewable energy, also for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The second and first pie chart each compares the usage of sustainable
power
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 with the other types in Germany and France from
last
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 year.
Overall
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,
While
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 France relied heavily on nuclear
power
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, Germany still used conventional thermal powers.
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, both countries had comparable portions of sustainable
power
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 usage. Germany's main
power
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 supplies came from conventional thermal. Sustainable
power
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 was the least used about 17.4%. The least sustainable
power
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 type that they used was solar. They almost equally utilize Biomass and Wind as renewable
power
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 sources, each had 39.3% and 36.9%.
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, The smallest total usage of renewable energy type was Geothermal France mainly utilizes nuclear as its main
power
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 supply. The smallest share of
power
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 sources came from conventional thermal
power
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 with 10.3%. Where their
power
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 supplies were mainly attained from Hydroelectric, other
power
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 sources
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 as biomass and wind were used in the same number. The tiniest percentage of renewable
power
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 utilized in there was solar at 0.9%.
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, the country did not make use of geothermal
power
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 at all.

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