The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1996, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of four kinds of
vehicles
which is
used in the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Uk
in different years,1996,1985 and 2005.
Correct your spelling
UK
Overall
, the highest rate of using Private cars can be observed in 2005 while
the opposite can be seen for Recreational vehicles
in 1985.
To begin
with, using Private cars accounted for 60% in 2005, This
figure for the same category in 1965 and 1985 was 40% and 55% respsctively
. A Correct your spelling
respectively
majoritey
of people Correct your spelling
majority
have
a great tendency to Wrong verb form
had
utlize
public transport in 1965 Correct your spelling
utilise
whereas
a minority of people prefer
to use Recreational Wrong verb form
preferred
vehicles
in 1985. The proportion of those who benefit
from Wrong verb form
benefitted
the
public transport in 1965 and 1985 Correct article usage
apply
were
quite similar at 25% and 20% ,respectively. Change the verb form
was
more over
, using the Lorries and other commercial Correct your spelling
moreover
vehicles
had the same amount in 1965 and 1985. The more notice able
feature is that the lowest rate of using Correct your spelling
noticeable
vehicles
can be considered for Recreational vehicles
in all of the years.Submitted by salehmiri1995 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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