The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate an industrial area located in the town of Norbiton and the plan for its development in the future.
Overall
, it is evident that the site is planned to become a residential area by replacing factories with houses.
In addition
, some basic infrastructures will be added to
this
location.
To begin
with, all the places dedicated to the industry will be demolished, and replaced with new buildings which are suitable for accommodation.
Also
, it is predicted that a new residential building will be constructed in the north of the river
while
now it is only farmland. It is noteworthy that
this
new place will be connected to the centre of Norbition by a new road.
Moreover
, it is planned that some essential facilities will be opened in
this
region.
For instance
, a school, a playground, and a medical centre will be added in the east of town or some shops will be established in the west of the map.
Finally
, it is estimated that a new path will be extended from the biggest square to the northeastern part of the area, connecting houses to the centre square.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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