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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #percentage #population #four #asian #countries #cities #predictions #summarise #features #comparisons
The provided line graph elucidates the information
of
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 the
amount
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number
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 of
people
 housing in
town
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towns
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 in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, Malaysia,
Thailand
, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020 and projections for 2030 and 2024.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that the
proportion
 of society that
live
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lives
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 in
city
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 tended to incline.
On the other hand
, Malaysia had a
huge
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risen
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 than others. In 1970, the total percentage of
people
 that
been
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were
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 in
city
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the city
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 in Indonesia was only about 15%
while
 the percentage in
Thailand
nearly
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was nearly
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 the same at approximately
at
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20%. The
proportion
 of
people
 living in Manila and Kuala Lumpur
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was
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were
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was
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 on the same level, with
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a number
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number
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a number
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of 30
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30
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%. The
proportion
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slightly
upsurged
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 in 1980 and reached a high
of
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in 1990 with about 20% and 25% respectively. In 2000, both Indonesia and
Thailand
 had the same percentage of
people
 housing in town with
total
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a total
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25
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of 25
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%. After that, the
amount
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 of
people
 living in Bangkok increase dramatically until 2020. The projection
proportion
 of
people
 being urban
people
 in
Thailand
also
 had
same
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 pattern, it
growth
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 significantly and
reach
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reached
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 a peak
of
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in 2040
with
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 around 55%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, thailand, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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