The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph elucidates the information
of
the Change preposition
on
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
housing in Use synonyms
town
in Fix the agreement mistake
towns
Philippines
, Malaysia, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020 and projections for 2030 and 2024. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is obviously seen that the Linking Words
proportion
of society that Use synonyms
live
in Correct subject-verb agreement
lives
city
tended to incline. Add an article
the city
On the other hand
, Malaysia had a Linking Words
huge
Fix the agreement mistake
higher
risen
than others.
In 1970, the total percentage of Replace the word
rise
people
that Use synonyms
been
in Wrong verb form
were
city
in Indonesia was only about 15% Add an article
the city
while
the percentage in Linking Words
Thailand
Use synonyms
nearly
the same at approximately Add a missing verb
was nearly
at
20%. The Change preposition
apply
proportion
of Use synonyms
people
living in Manila and Kuala Lumpur Use synonyms
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
were
on the same level, with Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Correct article usage
a number
number
Correct article usage
a number
Change preposition
of 30
30
%. The Change preposition
of 30
proportion
Use synonyms
had
slightly Verb problem
apply
upsurged
in 1980 and reached a high Verb problem
increased
of
in 1990 with about 20% and 25% respectively. In 2000, both Indonesia and Change preposition
apply
Thailand
had the same percentage of Use synonyms
people
housing in town with Use synonyms
total
Correct article usage
a total
25
%. After that, the Change preposition
of 25
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
living in Bangkok increase dramatically until 2020. The projection Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
people
being urban Use synonyms
people
in Use synonyms
Thailand
Use synonyms
also
had Linking Words
same
pattern, it Change the article
the same
growth
significantly and Replace the word
grew
reach
a peak Wrong verb form
reached
of
in 2040 Change preposition
apply
with
around 55%.Change preposition
at
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