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The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female
students
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 enrolled in six different
art
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-related
subjects
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 at a UK university in 2011. The
subjects
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 include Linguistics, English Language and Literature,
Philosophy
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, History, Archaeology, and
Art
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 and
Design
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that female
students
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 dominated the enrollment in most of the
subjects
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, except for
Philosophy
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 and
Art
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 and
Design
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, where male
students
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 had a higher representation. In Linguistics, female
students
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 accounted for approximately 45%,
while
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 male
students
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 made up about 30%. The English Language and Literature subject saw a similar trend, with around 60% of the
students
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 being female and 40% male. In History, the proportion was more balanced, with female
students
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 constituting roughly 40% and male
students
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 30%.
Philosophy
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 was an exception to the general trend, with a higher proportion of male
students
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 (around 35%) compared to female
students
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 (20%).
Similarly
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, in
Art
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 and
Design
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, male
students
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 made up a slightly larger percentage (50%) compared to their female counterparts (40%). Archaeology was another subject where female
students
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 outnumbered males, with approximately 50% female enrollment compared to 30% male enrollment. In summary, the chart reveals that female
students
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 were more prevalent in most
art
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-related
subjects
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 at the UK university in 2011, with notable exceptions in
Philosophy
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 and
Art
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 and
Design
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, where male
students
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 were more represented.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, subjects, philosophy, art, design with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • art-related subjects
  • gender distribution
  • predominate
  • significant
  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
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