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The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female
students
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 enrolled in six different
art
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-related
subjects
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 at a UK university in 2011. The
subjects
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 include Linguistics, English Language and Literature,
Philosophy
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, History, Archaeology, and
Art
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 and
Design
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that female
students
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 dominated the enrollment in most of the
subjects
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, except for
Philosophy
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 and
Art
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 and
Design
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, where male
students
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 had a higher representation. In Linguistics, female
students
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 accounted for approximately 45%,
while
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 male
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 made up about 30%. The English Language and Literature subject saw a similar trend, with around 60% of the
students
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 being female and 40% male. In History, the proportion was more balanced, with female
students
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 constituting roughly 40% and male
students
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 30%.
Philosophy
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 was an exception to the general trend, with a higher proportion of male
students
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 (around 35%) compared to female
students
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 (20%).
Similarly
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, in
Art
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 and
Design
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, male
students
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 made up a slightly larger percentage (50%) compared to their female counterparts (40%). Archaeology was another subject where female
students
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 outnumbered males, with approximately 50% female enrollment compared to 30% male enrollment. In summary, the chart reveals that female
students
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 were more prevalent in most
art
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-related
subjects
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 at the UK university in 2011, with notable exceptions in
Philosophy
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 and
Art
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 and
Design
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, where male
students
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 were more represented.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, subjects, philosophy, art, design with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • art-related subjects
  • gender distribution
  • predominate
  • significant
  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
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