The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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statisctic

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statistic

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of mankind who intake fruits and

vegies

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in a five

portion

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portions

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in a day in the United Kingdom from 2001 to 2008.

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, from the day of 2001 till 2006, the percentage criteria of women who

inject

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healthy

nutritions

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nutrition

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increased

year

by

year

, later, took a bit downfall in

next

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two

years. In the UK, in 2001,the women section

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the ratio

with

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more than 20%. Meanwhile,

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men

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and

child

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children

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were

hold

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around 16% and 11%. In

next

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two

consecutive

years

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that is

, 2002 and 2003,

male

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the male

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and children sector

remain

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stick

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with the result of 2001 with neither any change of a bit. Surprisingly,

female

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category had much higher

consume

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year

by

year

. In the

year

2004,

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,

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section

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toddler came up with action and increase around more than 5%. Both

gender

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rise

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resepctively

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respectively

just

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under five

percent

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per cent

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. Suddenly, in 2005 and 2006, adult

male

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males

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and adult

female

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females

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became very bullish in consumption, and in 2006,

lady

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section reached

to

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the milestone by crossing the criteria of 30%. Later in

next

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two

years

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both sex category had a downfall, except

the

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category of children.

To conclude

, all groups came up with

increament

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increment

by every

year

aspecially

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especially

young

ledies

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ladies

in the topic of eating vegetables and fruits in a

five segment

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. Gradually,

two

other groups

were

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also

developed

the

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higher percentage of food between 2001 and 2008.