You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line charts demonstrate the
rate
of city denizens in four Southeast Asia
countries
between 1970 and 2020 and make forecasts
to
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2040.
Overall
, all four
countries
witnessed an increase and are predicted to continue
this
trend.
Furthermore
, it is forecasted that most Malaysians will have a preference for cities
at the end
of the period shown. In 1970, the Philippines and Malaysia were the two
countries
with the highest percentage of city
dweller
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dwellers
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, with about 32% and 30% respectively. Meanwhile, the
rate
of urban residents in Thailand and Indonesia were both below 20%, ranging from 15% to 18%. For the following 50 years, the figures for all
countries
experienced a rise. the
rate
of city residents in Malaysia and Indonesia surged and made it 75% and 50% respectively. The Philippines and Thailand
also
witnessed a climb in the
rate
of people living in urban areas, albeit to a lesser degree, to about 45% and 30% respectively. Concerning the future, four
countries
are thought to continue their trend. In Malaysia, it is predicted that above 80% of the population will be living in cities. Following that, 60% of Indonesia's population, 50% of Philippines people and 45% of Thai are forecasted to live in cities, respectively.
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  • Urban population
  • Trend analysis
  • Urbanization rate
  • Economic development
  • Rural-urban migration
  • Infrastructure
  • Socio-economic events
  • Stagnation
  • Anomalies
  • Environmental concerns
  • Predictive analysis
  • Geographical aspects
  • Government policies
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