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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the production of three types of energy in
units
, coal,
petroleum
, and natural gas between 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen from the diagram the consumption of
petroleum
 was higher than the other two,
while
 coal was the least consumed by the citizens and dramatic fluctuations can be experienced in natural gas,
while
petroleum
 and coal declined after oscillations. It is conspicuous that, in 1981
petroleum
 consumed 90
million
units
 and it immediately jumped to 140
million
units
 in 1984,
further
 it was constant till 1987 and from that year it plunged to 100 billion
units
 in 1990.
Furthermore
, it swung and augmented touched 140
million
units
 in 1996,
in addition
 after some movements it hit 140
million
units
 in 2000. Probing ahead, coal energy was 80
million
units
 in 1981, which was almost constant till 1982 and after that, it plummeted and attained 38
million
units
 in 1984 after the consumption of coal
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increased dramatically and touched 60
million
units
 in 1986,
additionally
, it was partially constant till 1989 and kept declining until reached to 35
million
units
 in 2000.
In addition
, natural gas was nearly 40
million
units
 in 1981 after it was unchanged till nine years in 1990,
then
 it showed an increment gradually and hit 100
million
units
 in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words units, petroleum, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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