The charts below show the percentage of water consumption in different sectors in six major parts of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water consumption in different sectors in six major parts of the world.
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The given pie charts illustrate and give
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helicopter view of the proportion of
water
used for three purposes in various areas around the world. As can be seen from the charts, the amount of
water
used for agriculture is at the top in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia
while
North America and Europe consume most for industrial development.
Overall
, there are few noticeable differences between the extent of
water
usage in these areas. It can be clearly seen from the 2 4 5 6 illustrations that the majority of
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is consumed for agriculture, fluctuating from 71% to 88%.
In contrast
, the amount of
water
used for industry and domestic use ranges from 12% to 29%. Regarding North America and Europe, the percentage of
water
utilization for industrial use is the highest with 48% and 53%. Following behind is the allotment of
water
consumed for agriculture with 39% and 32%
while
for domestic use
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just around 15%.
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