The pie charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams compare information about the proportion of time that two different ages(18-26 and 60-70 years old) use the Internet in 6 various activities in their leisure time.
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, Social networking is the main reason that younger use the Internet Linking Words
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the younger chart, young people prefer to use Social networking because it has 24 per Linking Words
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Accessing music, or film and Researching health data have second level roughly 20 per Linking Words
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, playing games, making purchases, and Linking Words
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booking cinema and travel respectively have a low percentage.
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Accessing music, or film, making purchases, and playing game. Amazingly, making purchases has the same proportion in both groups.Linking Words
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