The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph above shows the number of female and male
students
taking several key lessons at a US university in 2010. Data suggests that Finance was the mostly
studied subject, Rephrase
most
while
Engineering had the least amount of students
.
Interestingly, both Finance and Engineering were the only courses in which there was little to no difference between the number of female and male students
. Compared with the second most sought lesson, Accounting, that
had slightly Correct pronoun usage
which
less
male learners. Correct quantifier usage
fewer
This
gap was widening for all the other courses, especially Economics and even greater in Mathematics. For these two latter cases, the proportion was inverted, with male students
made
up almost 50% more of the class in Economics, and more than 100% in Mathematics.
In general, classes in which male Wrong verb form
making
students
were the majority of the learners, had an extreme imbalance of the numbers of female students
enrolled in those courses. On the other hand
, the opposite situation did not result in much of a wide gap on
the quantity of male Change preposition
in
students
in the classes.Submitted by arsyiiimuhammad061 on
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