Some university students want to learn about other subject in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the present day of society, public debate has been going on over whether it is important for university students to learn and focus

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a specific qualification or not. As I see it, it is very crucial for higher students to be more focused on

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before they take other things to learn. Giving attention to a specific accomplishment has many benefits in various ways. In the first place, having a deep understanding of one thing will bring you to your dream job. To be more exact, your expertise in that thing will make you look better than any job seeker because, in

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era, the industry really needs someone who has good skills and knowledge.

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, learning one specific competency will save you from stress. Without a doubt studying for a long period of time will make you feel bored and stressed, but you can reduce that feeling by choosing one thing that you love the most. After that, you can use you free time that you have after learning for rest to make you feel calm and relaxed again. Surely,

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university students wanting to study additional subjects, it will cause a lot of problems. I admit that taking another subject will cost a lot of money, and will take a lot of time. Those two factors can make college

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stressed,

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, and

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can make them overwhelmed.