You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for tI time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter give details of what was wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir ,
Hope you are doing well . I am writing
this
letter to show my dissatisfaction with the service you providied
during our stay in your hotel .
Actually , I recently visited your hotel for Correct your spelling
provided
one
Correct determiner usage
a
week
stay in the Maldives during the summer time for our business meeting purpose. Correct your spelling
one-week
Although
, the room was quite spacious but
the cooling system inside the room was totally inadequate . AsRemove the conjunction
apply
,
air Remove the comma
apply
conditionning
system was not working properly . Correct your spelling
conditioning
Moreover
, the ouside
weather was extremely hot at that time . So, Correct your spelling
outside
i
faced a lot of problems during Change the capitalization
I
the
stay .
To overcome the issue Change the word
my
temporary
, I purchased a small table fan from the market . So, Change the word
temporarily
i
can sleep in a calm environment . Because Change the capitalization
I
,
for next three to four days have Remove the comma
apply
continous
meeting with the important business clients . I do not want any mess up Correct your spelling
continuous
with
my business deals .
What Change preposition
apply
i
want from you , please ensure well in advance , if Change the capitalization
I
the
everything is working properly or not inside the room . Apart from that , please try to refund some amount because of Correct your spelling
that
this
inconvenience .
I will wait for your response regarding this
matter as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully ,
Harjeet kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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coherence and cohesion
Review grammar and spelling, paying special attention to commonly confused words (e.g., 'continous' should be 'continuous').
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coherence and cohesion
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