The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps indicate an industrial
area
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of the
town
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of
Norbiton
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and the future development plan for
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place.
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, it can be seen that
Norbiton
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is an industrial
area
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with lots of factories at the moment
while
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it will be more residential in the future. Looking at the details, it appears that the
Norbiton
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industrial
area
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at the moment has one
square
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in the middle of the
town
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that is
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surrounded by lots of factories. The
square
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is connected to the road in the south part of the
town
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. Another thing is that the river is in the north part of the
town
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and farmland is across the river. In the near future, a new bridge will connect the
square
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to the other side of the river. The new housing
area
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will be replaced with farmland, which will be relocated to the right side of the map. Another interesting change is that all the factories will be knocked down and replaced with the housing
area
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.
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, around the
square
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many facilities like playgrounds, schools, shops and medical centers will be constructed. The final striking change is that a new
square
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will be built in the south part of the
Norbiton
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, connected to the
last
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one.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town, norbiton, square with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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