The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph below illustrates the
proportion
of Australian males and females in
a variety of Change preposition
of
ages
who did daily physical exercise in 2010.
It is clear that
most men
between 45 to 54 ages
were more interested in workouts, whereas
the figure for women during teenage ages
peaked at proportion
.
In detail, the figure for women during 15 to 24 was 52.8% while
that of men
was lower at 47.7%. During the ages
of 25 to 34, the percentage of physical workouts in men
was 48.9 % whereas
that of women was 42.2%. In addition
, when males reached the ages
of 35 to 44, this
figure increased gradually by 3.6. By contrast
, there was a slight decline in the proportion
of physical activity for females from 35 to 44 which was at 39.5%.
Therefore
, the proportion
of doing exercise among females after 45 years old rose marginally from 43.1% to 46.7%. However
, these figures for males declined from 53.3% to 47.1%. Furthermore
, from 25 to over 65 the percentage of activity for men
was more than female, while
only teenage girls were more interested in doing workouts.Submitted by www.marzieh.eidi on
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