The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph below illustrates the
proportion
of Australian males and females Use synonyms
in
a variety of Change preposition
of
ages
who did daily physical exercise in 2010.
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It is clear that
most Linking Words
men
between 45 to 54 Use synonyms
ages
were more interested in workouts, Use synonyms
whereas
the figure for women during teenage Linking Words
ages
peaked at Use synonyms
proportion
.
In detail, the figure for women during 15 to 24 was 52.8% Use synonyms
while
that of Linking Words
men
was lower at 47.7%. During the Use synonyms
ages
of 25 to 34, the percentage of physical workouts in Use synonyms
men
was 48.9 % Use synonyms
whereas
that of women was 42.2%. Linking Words
In addition
, when males reached the Linking Words
ages
of 35 to 44, Use synonyms
this
figure increased gradually by 3.6. Linking Words
By contrast
, there was a slight decline in the Linking Words
proportion
of physical activity for females from 35 to 44 which was at 39.5%.
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Therefore
, the Linking Words
proportion
of doing exercise among females after 45 years old rose marginally from 43.1% to 46.7%. Use synonyms
However
, these figures for males declined from 53.3% to 47.1%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, from 25 to over 65 the percentage of activity for Linking Words
men
was more than female, Use synonyms
while
only teenage girls were more interested in doing workouts.Linking Words
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