The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

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The bar charts illustrate the

number

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graduate

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and postgraduate

students

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in the UK who did not have full-time work after graduation in 2008.

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, there were four

activities

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that these

students

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engaged in after leaving college, namely part-time jobs, voluntary

activities

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further

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study, and unemployment. It can be seen that both

graduate

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and postgraduate

students

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who did not secure full-time work primarily decided to continue their studies,

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a smaller

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participated in voluntary

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. In detail, the majority of graduates who did not obtain full-time jobs chose to continue their studies, with approximately 29,665

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doing so.

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, 2,725 postgraduate

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pursued

further

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study.

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, part-time work was the second most common activity among graduates, with around 17,735

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, and among postgraduates, with 2,535

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. Meanwhile, about 16,235

graduate

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students

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were unemployed, a situation that

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affected 1,625 postgraduate

students

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although

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this

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number

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was lower than that of graduates.

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, voluntary

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were the least common choice, with around 3,500

graduate

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students

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and a slightly lower

number

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of postgraduate

students

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, about 345, participating in them

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

graduate and postgraduate students
full-time work
further study
part-time work
voluntary work
engagement levels
trend analysis
financial needs
social consciousness
practical experience
personal growth
international exposure
gap period
unemployed
economic reasons
career paths

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and wha actions can be taken to solve this problem?

The avarage standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future now. to what extend do you agree or dis agree with this statement?