The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
of
graduate
and postgraduate
students
in the UK who did not have full-time work after graduation in 2008.
Overall
, there were four
activities
that these
students
engaged in after leaving college, namely part-time jobs, voluntary
activities
,
further
study, and unemployment. It can be seen that both
graduate
and postgraduate
students
who did not secure full-time work primarily decided to continue their studies,
while
a smaller
number
participated in voluntary
activities
. In detail, the majority of graduates who did not obtain full-time jobs chose to continue their studies, with approximately 29,665
students
doing so.
Similarly
, 2,725 postgraduate
students
pursued
further
study.
Additionally
, part-time work was the second most common activity among graduates, with around 17,735
students
, and among postgraduates, with 2,535
students
. Meanwhile, about 16,235
graduate
students
were unemployed, a situation that
also
affected 1,625 postgraduate
students
,
although
this
number
was lower than that of graduates.
In addition
, voluntary
activities
were the least common choice, with around 3,500
graduate
students
and a slightly lower
number
of postgraduate
students
, about 345, participating in them
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, graduate, students, activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graduate and postgraduate students
  • full-time work
  • further study
  • part-time work
  • voluntary work
  • engagement levels
  • trend analysis
  • financial needs
  • social consciousness
  • practical experience
  • personal growth
  • international exposure
  • gap period
  • unemployed
  • economic reasons
  • career paths
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