The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
of graduate
and postgraduate students
in the UK who did not have full-time work after graduation in 2008. Overall
, there were four activities
that these students
engaged in after leaving college, namely part-time jobs, voluntary activities
, further
study, and unemployment. It can be seen that both graduate
and postgraduate students
who did not secure full-time work primarily decided to continue their studies, while
a smaller number
participated in voluntary activities
.
In detail, the majority of graduates who did not obtain full-time jobs chose to continue their studies, with approximately 29,665 students
doing so. Similarly
, 2,725 postgraduate students
pursued further
study. Additionally
, part-time work was the second most common activity among graduates, with around 17,735 students
, and among postgraduates, with 2,535 students
.
Meanwhile, about 16,235 graduate
students
were unemployed, a situation that also
affected 1,625 postgraduate students
, although
this
number
was lower than that of graduates. In addition
, voluntary activities
were the least common choice, with around 3,500 graduate
students
and a slightly lower number
of postgraduate students
, about 345, participating in themSubmitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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