The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
The graph illustrates the destination report of UK
graduates
and postgraduates
after leaving their tertiary education.
Overall
, the part-time work done by graduate
students
was tenfold higher than postgraduate students
. Nevertheless
, the unemployment
rate of postgraduates
is less than one-fourth of the graduate
unemployment
rate.
Firstly
, the number of graduate
students
who engaged in part-time jobs was 17,735 whereas
for postgraduates
, it was 2,535. Secondly
, voluntary work is the area where most of the graduates
and postgraduates
refused to show interest. In this
, 3,500 graduates
participated meanwhile only 350 postgraduates
took part. Moreover
, Further
study was opted by 2,725 people from postgraduation and 29,665 from graduation. However
, the unemployment
ratio of postgraduates
was 1,625 and that of graduates
was 16,235. To sum up
, postgraduates
have a higher demand for part-time jobs than graduates
and also
their unemployment
rate is very less compared to the graduate
students
. Furthermore
, graduate
students
delineate more interest in higher education than postgraduates
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, postgraduates, graduate, students, unemployment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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