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The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
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The graph illustrates the destination report of UK
graduates
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 and
postgraduates
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 after leaving their tertiary education.
Overall
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, the part-time work done by
graduate
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students
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 was tenfold higher than postgraduate
students
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.
Nevertheless
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, the
unemployment
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 rate of
postgraduates
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 is less than one-fourth of the
graduate
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unemployment
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 rate.
Firstly
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, the number of
graduate
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students
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 who engaged in part-time jobs was 17,735
whereas
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 for
postgraduates
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, it was 2,535.
Secondly
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, voluntary work is the area where most of the
graduates
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 and
postgraduates
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 refused to show interest. In
this
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, 3,500
graduates
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 participated meanwhile only 350
postgraduates
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 took part.
Moreover
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,
Further
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 study was opted by 2,725 people from postgraduation and 29,665 from graduation.
However
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, the
unemployment
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 ratio of
postgraduates
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 was 1,625 and that of
graduates
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 was 16,235.
To sum up
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,
postgraduates
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 have a higher demand for part-time jobs than
graduates
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 and
also
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 their
unemployment
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 rate is very less compared to the
graduate
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students
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.
Furthermore
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,
graduate
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students
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 delineate more interest in higher education than
postgraduates
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, postgraduates, graduate, students, unemployment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graduate and postgraduate students
  • full-time work
  • further study
  • part-time work
  • voluntary work
  • engagement levels
  • trend analysis
  • financial needs
  • social consciousness
  • practical experience
  • personal growth
  • international exposure
  • gap period
  • unemployed
  • economic reasons
  • career paths
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