The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the changes in
population
in Japan, from 1950 to 2015, and its prediction up until 2055. The table illustrates the
population
of people over 65 years old during the same time period.
Overall
, the total
population
has increased and it is predicted to fall in the future, and citizens over 65 are projected to
dominant
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in terms
population
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of population
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in the future. At the outset of the period, Japan’s
population
was 84.1
million
;
however
, the
figure
climbed steadily to about 127
million
, in half a decade.
This
figure
stayed fairly the same within the next 15 years.
Additionally
, over
65 year olds
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contributed to about 5% of the total
population
in 1950.
This
figure
quadrupled by 2005. When looking into the projections, it seems like
Japanese
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the Japanese
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population
is predicted to fall throughout the upcoming years. In 2035, the
figure
would be 110
million
, and in 2055, it would have fallen by 20
million
.
Although
the total number of Japanese is projected to decline, the number of senior
citizen
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citizens
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is expected to double from 20% (in 2005) to 40% (in 2055).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, million, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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