The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The present line chart demonstrates data about the number of foods consumed in five different types namely vegetables, fruit, meat, bread, and
seafood
in Australia from 1950 until 2010.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the type of food which had the highest consumption amount is vegetable.
However
,
seafood
is the lowest in all 60 years.
According to
the graph, the first dish was vegetables, and at the beginning of 1950 had 140
kg
also
, the line decreased to 120
kg
in 1970 and 2000;
moreover
, the line enormously increased to 160
Kg
in 2010. the second most popular food in 1950 was meat 110
Kg
;
furthermore
,
this
trend peaked in 1990 at roughly 120
Kg
, but the trend declined to 80Kg in 2010.
However
, fruit which chose various alternatives to meat started at 80
Kg
in 1950;
then
the diagram moderately rising to 140
Kg
, but in 1970 the amount was the same as in 1950. As can be seen in the bread, and
Seafood
, the bread had rapid change. in 1950 started by 40
Kg
. Later in 1970 peaked; after that, reduced to 60
Kg
absolutely the same as in 1980.
Seafood
was not changing too much;
therefore
, the figures in 1950 were nearly the same as in 2010
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Vocabulary: Replace the words seafood, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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